Focus Groups Re-drafted

 We had two focus group meetings, we took on board the comments made on the first feedbacks of the introduction of our clip being to long, and lack of variety on shots. Our team looked upon these issues and improved them. the re-draft of our clip made the feedbacks 100% better with more positive comments. The audience was impressed with the added shots. They found it much more humorous and liked the fart sounds which got them hooked. This gratification theory was done successfully and pleased the audience. the focus group allowed us to compare our ideas to the critics decisions on how it work, also allowed us to see things from other peoples point of view which we my have not taken into consideration in our earlier clip.